Saturday, December 27, 2025

poem

 Compared to What?

How do you know if you’re good?

A group of us gets together every week

In the basements of run-down churches

To anonymously discuss this.

We drink coffee and someone always brings donuts

And everyone seems to have a cigarette except me.

The question hangs in front of us

Half shrouded in the plume of gray smoke

That doesn’t have anywhere else to go.

There’s no choice but to try to answer.

I go first—

My name is Jeff P. and this is everything I’ve done 

Good and bad and the things that could go either way

Or are yet to be determined

And it’s all true and unvarnished

Spilling out of me in stream of consciousness

Narrative that doesn't really empty into

A vast ocean of meaning but just sort

Of peters out into a stagnant backyard sinkhole.

Mostly it’s the bad stuff because

That’s all I really remember 

(Who remembers all the good stuff

Anyway? What are you, a narcissist?)

The good stuff I do recall seems so trite and mediocre

Like the one time I remembered 

A janitor’s name, Cyrus, who 

Says hello to me every morning 

Or teaching my kid how to tie his shoes.

A lot of the good stuff is things like that

And I don’t want to bore everyone to death.

Everyone prefers a juicy story of tragedy and self-

Inflicted heartbreak, rampant with pointless plot twists 

That always lead back to the same place 

We all seem to share.

To be fair, statistical analysis would reveal

These tales of woe are probably outliers 

And can be excluded from the main data set.

But that’s not the way it works down here

My standard deviation is just wide enough

To get me exiled to this godforsaken place.

When I finish, someone else begins to speak.

It’s gut punch after gut punch 

You hear some really horrific stories 

Down in the bowels of holy sanctuaries.

None of them make any holistic sense

You keep waiting for denouement 

But suddenly a new character appears 

Halfway through Act IV and now 

We have to find out what happens to her. 

Whenever someone finishes rambling

We’re all supposed to cast a vote

Yes or no written on a folded scrap of paper.

Everyone takes a turn.

At the end of the meeting the chairperson

Goes around and collects our votes

And places them in a plastic Halloween pumpkin.

Then she stands at the front of the room

And reads them one by one:

Yes

No 

Yes

Yes

No

Blank 

No

Yes 

Blank

Blank

Blank


12/27/25

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